[ Lyrics ] Open Question : Lyrics I Made Up..how are they? Chords and drum beat welcome?

Hey these are lyrics i made up please comment, alter or make up a song for my band pleasee thanks Its called Painting on the wall The painting on the wall The valley and the mountains And the bright blue water fall With The River beneath it Its all too good to be true The clouds arent really so white The Views not quite right And the sun doesnt shine As Bright Im not a stranger To cold dark places Or unfamiliar faces But this code i cant snap Its Like Im in a small gap Step out of dreamland Step into reality Take a look around Normality This is how it really is x 2 So stop painting Those pretty little pictures Stop painting our downfall Just wait till destiny calls x3 fading what do you think? you can give me chords to it too and a drum beat! thankss