[ Poetry ] Open Question : What do you think of my poem? Please be honest?

Like a stone thrown into the ocean I fall too hard, too fast I pretend that things are perfect When they were never meant to last A salty splash then brings me back Reminds me once again I'm floating out upon the sea No love, no hope, no friends The waves they wash upon me Their harshness brings me down I sink into the lonely depths My heart begins to drown I'm falling too hard too fast Like a helpless sinking stone I rest upon the sandy bottom Remembering I'm all alone The light begins to fade away And darkness takes its place Although I cannot see a thing My heart it does not race For fear it becomes anger Panic becomes fury I did not treasure what I had My heart was in a hurry And now because of ignorance And absent-minded thought I slowly lie in agony Awaiting loveless rot Perhaps beyond earth love is kind It it is innocent and pure But as for love everlasting That I will never be sure My heart was broken in the storm The sails torn from my mast Like a stone throw into the ocean I fall too hard, too fast